Week 4 Reflection: Project Revision

After listening to feedback from the instructor, I revised my previous website for the fictitious business.  Feedback and revision help us to learn the techniques and concepts being taught in the course.  Another purpose for any revision is to make the piece better. I'll admit, I think the revised site looks much nicer.

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One of the suggestions the instructor made was to make better use some of the negative space in the header.  To this end, I enlarged the menu, added the email address along with the phone number, and gave a call to action by instructing them to contact Harry for service area.  I also moved the mission statement onto the picture.  The second major issue was the way I had the page title above the fold, but the important information below it.  I moved all the most important information to above the fold.  It makes the page look more balanced and allows the viewer to see what they are looking for without having to hunt for it.  The instructor also suggested I do away with the Contact page because it was redundant.  I had all that information on every page, so it wasn't really needed.  I added the email to the header and eliminated the Contact page altogether.  I also revamped the waiver so it was more complete.

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